ZetoSoul's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Squidweird]

More like "belongs in the trash."

[Resolution]

Cute. We could all do our part to make the world better, but too many are convinced that stopping the violence in our world requires more violence. An endless cycle, but we do have the power to alter the course of fate.

My only critique is maybe try to work on your hatching some more. If you worked on your hatching,
then your drawings would look like they have more genuine mass and volume.

DrSevenSeizeMD responds:

Thanks for the critique, and I agree 100% that we can't fix hate with more hate.

[STOP SAYING MEAN THINGS!!]

Nice art. Simple and cute. Also the virus' mom is ugly.

ChutneyGlaze responds:

HOW DARE YOU DO UOU KNOW WHO I AM I AM IFREAKING BIG YELLOW MAN I WILL TAKE YOU DOWN I wILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND BAKE YOU INTO A PIE YOU MISARABLE BAFFOON!
YOU WILL LOOK IN THE SKY AND SEE ONLY BLACKNESS BECAUSE YPU WILL BE IN A PIE AND THERFORE YOU DONBT EVEN SEE HOW POSSIBLE THE INTERNET WS SO CLOSE AND NOW WILL SUFFER THE PAIN OF BRAIN ATTACK HUGE POOP FALLING FROM SKY ONLY BLOOD FIRE!

[hunt and peck]

I like the fluid, rapid motion of the bird's pecking.
I bet he tripled his productivity.

[Happy B-Day Cory!]

Near perfect drawing, but improve your shading and line work.

[Tails]

Where is his realistic fur? His human-like eyes and teeth? And I'm not confused as to why you didn't give him a muscular man-baby body which shows his dedication to be being a physically fit hero who can answer the call to action at break neck speed.

I want my mascot characters to be uncanny, horrifying, and soulless in this day and age. I'm disappointed that you decided draw something so simple, clean and cute looking instead.

[Comic Practice]

This looks like a quality comic. The art is nice and it leaves me wondering where the story is supposed to be going.

I guess if I were to lay out a critique, I'd say make a model sheet to keep it more on model, but maybe you've already done that. If you're going for a more off-model style deliberately, then maybe exaggerate the expressions and poses in certain parts to really emphasize the emotions, but careful not to overdo that.
I think you should also try using darker colors in some spots. Your use of color is nice and soft, which does look pleasing, but I think adding darker colors in certain parts on the characters or the background would make everything feel more solid.
Your line work also looks really good, but maybe you should the thicken the lines a bit, especially in a panel like the one where the lizard guys run away.

Overall, clean work with nice colors and adorable designs. I personally would like to see more comics from you.

SomeTinyCritter responds:

I only have one other pic I did of my OCs as a model sheet, and even then it's just one pose. I guess I should work on doing model sheets for other reoccurring characters like the princess and villain.

Thanks for recommending the colour suggestion ^^ I used the same sized brush for all the lineart so I guess the weight should change up to match the distance of each character.

Thank you so so much for your feedback! I really appreciate this!

[Jeff and the girls]

The story of Chris-Chan would get worse and worse if he kept going.

[3D Zelda Room]

This looks really smooth and cozy. I think it needs a little more texture and could use that classic WW cel-shading, but I understand you just want to show off an older piece from when you were less experienced. Overall, really nice and I would visit this place if I could.

[Inkwell Superstars]

You made a deal with the devil. That's why you can post a lot of good art so fast. As always, it looks good and is bursting with your personal style.